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Wednesday, 18 September 2013

Mrs goat and her seven little kids.

1.Intro - Once upon a time.

2.Wolfs 1st visit - voice.

3.wolfs 2nd visit - paw.

4. wolfs 3rd visit - tail.

5.wolf 4th visit - he ate them.

6.mom came - hoffed him on the bottom.

Once upon a time there were seven little kids. The 7 little kids stayed home and the mum went to pak n save to buy some milk and ice cream.And the mother said to them do not let the big fat wolf and and the little 7 kids said okay mom we won't let him in so the mom went to pak n save and this deep voice said let me in it’s me your mother the wolf cried let me in and the 7 kids said is it really you yes yes let me in so the little 7 kids said let me see your tail so he put in tail in the door mail and the 7 kids said it’s not mom so 1 little kid grabbed his hama and whacked the tail of the wolf.

So the big bad wolf went to the painting room and said teach me to have the mother goats tail or als i will bite your head of so the big bad wolf got what he wanted and went back and said let me  in and the 7 kids said let me see your tail and he let him look at his tail and that looks like mom tail.

And the 7 kids said let me look at your hand and they looked at his hand and they said it’s not mom his hairy so they bit his hand OUCH OUCH OUCH OUCH!!!!!!! The wolf cried and said when I get you I am going to eat you little 7 kids.

Tuesday, 10 September 2013

Hiwarau's cross country.

Cross Country Run - Writing Plan

What is the message I want to give my audience?
What do I want them to know or think about my cross country?
That when I started to run my throat was starting to get dry but I still wanted to run and I cames 5th.
Who is my audience?
My school and usain bolt.
Paragraph plan.
What are the topics I’m going to write about?
1.mud paddles.
2.runs so so fast like usain bolt.
3.finishing.
What are some words, special vocabulary I can use to make my message clear?
fit and ready
trained hard
heart pounding
waiting nervously  

What does my introduction need to do?
I had a stitch on the side of my hips.






Cross Country Run  - writing


My Introduction
I was so nervous I had butterflies in my little tummy and after all these training I have been starting and I was shaking with fear. And finally the day has came for cross country.






Paragraph about: 1.mud puddles.
When the race was over I was so tired but lucky I didn't wear my shoes or als my shoes will get stuck in the mud. I was so exhausted that the race was over. And when I looked at the back of my pants the were soggy and muddy and wet.




Paragraph about .runs so so fast like usain bolt.:
When I ran so fast like usain bolt lots and lots of mud went all over on me.I just couldn't wait to  it was finish. We had to run all over the mud it was annoying because my feet was going in the mud.  



Monday, 12 August 2013

Hiwarau speech Marks practise 1.

WALT - use speech marks to show direct speaking.

Fill in the Speech Marks:



”Good morning,” said the check-out lady. “Do you have your Fly Buys card?”

Joe had a really sore tummy.”I can’t go to school,’’ he groaned.

’’ I don't think so’ replied James.

‘’Yes Bob replied. ‘’That's what I'm going to do.’’

‘’Is that what you were after?’’ asked Sally.

’’ Hello, said Tony.

’’ I want the ball’’ yelled Bill to all the other players.

‘’What’s the time’’ asked Mark.’’ It’s 9 o’clock replied
Tom.?’’

‘’ It isn't fair! he complained bitterly. ‘’I always have to wash the dishes.’’

‘’Oh no! cried Jake.’’ I don't want to go swimming!’’

‘’What do you want to do when you grow up’’ said John.
‘’I don’t know replied Dan ‘’I might be a pilot.’’

‘’I watched carefully as the teacher did the example’’. Now have a go at doing it yourself’’ she said. ‘’I still wasn’t sure so I asked her to go ‘’through it again.’’

 ‘’What are your hobbies asked Jill.’’
Well said Jack ‘’I like collecting model cars.’’
‘’How du’’ll laughed Jill. Jack sulked and wouldn’t speak to ‘’Jill for the rest of the day’’

‘’I am tired’’ the boy said and then drifted off to sleep.’’

Friday, 9 August 2013

siapo pattern

We learnt to do our own siapo pattern

Wednesday, 7 August 2013

Hiwarau three little pig

Once upon a time there were three little pigs. That wanted to be grown ups so they said goodbye to the mother and father.And of they went walking to the woods and they saw something running between the trees it was grey and it had yellow eyes it had sharp teeth and it looked hungry.So the three littel pigs ran down to a place were it’s nice and sunny.

Then the three little pigs found their spot. One little pig was lazy  he made his house out of hay. When he was finished he went for a sleep when he was about to close his eyes he heard something it  sounded like footsteps. It was the big bad wolf and he said ‘’Come out my child’’ and the little pig looked out of his window and said’’ I do not know you  and I am not your child ‘’ the little pig said.



‘’When the big bad wolf took a big breath’ he huffed and he puffed and blew the house down’’ then the little pig ran to the second pig and went to his house and started to go sleep and it was prickly he said and pig said because I made my house out of sticks.And then the 2 little pigs were scared of the big bad wolf and then the ‘’wolf said come out come out before I blow your your house down’’ so the big bad wolf huffed and puffed and blew the house down’’ and the 2 little pigs ran to the 3erd pigs house.

‘’Then  the big bad wolf huffed  and puffed and did not blow the house down’’ and the bad wolf felt dizzy and he got knocked out because he went out of breath’’.And the three little pigs all went to sleep.

And then when the big bad wolf woke up of the ground he decided to claim the chimney’’. And  one pig woke up and put a fire on and a big boiling pot of water on the fire and went back to sleep. And the big bad wolf claims down the chimney he slipped and fell into the boiling pot of water OUCH!!! and started to cook.And when the three little pigs woke up they had a big feed.