Make a copy: Time with friends
You have just had a time when you’ve done something special with your friends and classmates.
Write to recount that time.
Write about:
- when and where you did something special
- who was with you
- what you did (think about the order you did things)
- how you felt and why you felt this way.
Remember to:
- choose your words carefully
- write in full sentences
- take care with your spelling and punctuation
- give your writing a title if you want to
- check your work: read it through and fix any mistakes you find
One day my friend and I went to go to the Sylvia. We went to Sylvia to buy somethings for his birthday. He took me to Mcdonalds and to The Ice Cream shop. We were looking for something that he really wanted.
He didn't get to find something he really wanted, So he bought me some food to eat it was delicious. Once we were finished shopping from Sylvia, We went back to his house to have dinner. Once dinner was finished we had his Birthday cake. It was nice.
When dessert was finished we went back out to see the Matariki light trail
It was amazing seeing lots of colorful lights around us. So Brandon and I went walking around the area where lights were. After that we went to walk close to the stage to watch the performance from the Cook Island kids they were amazing.
When the Matariki lights turned off. It was time to go home. When we got back to his house. We went straight to sleep We were soo tired. When we got up, We had to make our beds and then have breakfast. I had Weetabix and toast He had the same as me. I was still sleepy, After that we went walking around Glen Innes looking for something to do. Once we found something to do we weren't bored anymore.
We went the Internet cafe to play some games and listen to music on Youtube. When our time was up we went to Mcdonalds to buy two frozen Cokes. They were super cold but super tasty.
The next was Sunday it was time to go church. Church starts at 10:00am. We got up at 8:30 am, So we had a shower got changed into our church clothes done our hairs. Then went to church in the van. Once we got to church the pastor was praying and talking about jesus christ. When church was finished we went back to his house to play on the xbox 360. When it was time for me to go home I said bye to his family and went home
