Hiwarau sentence Mashup 2

WALT: Change the order of the words in sentences

1. Write the sentence in an order that makes sense. Remember punctuation.

2. Re-write the sentence with the same message but in a different order (you may need to change a word or two).

3. Highlight the text of your favourite version each time.

	make / people / laugh / when they are sad/ I
1.	When people are sad I make people laugh.
2.	I make people laugh when people are sad.

	play / I / a musical instrument / in the evening
1	In the evening I play a musical instrument.
2	I play a musical instrument in the evening.

	shy / not / when I meet / new people / I am
1	When I meet new people I am not shy.
2	I am not shy when I meet new people.

	my best friend / next to me / is sitting
1	My best friend is sitting next to me.
2	Next to me is my best friend.

	standing / is / behind me / My teacher
1	My teacher is standing behind me.
2	Behind me is my teacher.

	Solar system / the eighth planet / is / Neptune / in our
1	The eighth planet in Neptune is in our solar system.
2	Neptune is our eighth planet of our solar system.

	to London / go / I / want to
1	I want to go to London.
2	London is where I want to go.

	my favourite city / is / Auckland
1	My favourite city is Auckland.
2	Auckland is my favourite city.

Hiwarau week over franks.

On Saturday and Sunday I was sleeping over Franks to help his mum bake some cupcakes and muffins,cakes. It was nice Franks mum is a good cooker when i grow up i want to be a chief like chief Ramsey and Franks mum.When the cakes and the cupcakes, and muffins were ready we started to put some icing on the cake and muffins and then put chocolate on the pancakes and the put chocolate on the cupcakes.

When we were ready to eat the cakes and the muffins and the cupcakes were finished putting the icing on the cakes and muffins and cupcakes it was ready to eat it was nice my taste buds were bursting with flavour in my mouth it was so nice i got full over two on sunday.We took some muffins to church it was Franks church after church we went back to Frank's place.

To get some swimming togs with his death brother Whiti we went to the we got ready in our togs and to jump in the pool and Frank’s brother Whiti jumped in the pool with his hat on.

When we got back to Frank’s house we had to help his mum out to do our dinner and dessert.

When dinner was ready everybody  went straight to the table to have their dinner dessert. We had to wash our hands and pray when we were finished praying. It was time to prey on our food and dessert then we watched some movies on the tv.

Adding detail to the end of sentence.

children had to stay inside at lunchtime because on Friday. It was cold and raining.

All the year 5 and 6 children have their own net-book. To help them learn.

The fields are muddy outside.Because it was the thunder the rain and hailstones.

Playtime is at 11.am.And that's when Pt England school kids can eat their lunch.

Learning my timetable is important. Because it’s to help me get brainy.

Hiwarau Antartica Movie

This movie is about my Killer Whale.

seals.

                        Puting detail in the middel of the sentences

    Antarctic seals have thick layer of blubber,under their  skin,to help them survive from strong icy gales.

During winter the sun doesn't rise in Antarctica, it is always dark in winter and the temperature drops below zero.

Leopard seals prey on Antarctic penguins,for their diet and to survive.

Detail In Sentences

WALT
Mr Burt takes assemblies on Friday for Pt England school\


Mr Burt takes us to assemblies where we sing the national anthem on Friday.


Mr Burt takes us to assemblies for d Duffy certificates and sometimes shows, on Friday.

Lots of people are from a faraway places to come visit Auckland city in New Zealand.

Penguins surviving.

                            W.A.L.T

Penguins are birds that live in the Southern Oceans. Penguins don’t live in the North pole.

There are only polar bears in the North pole. In the southern ocean they live at the bottom of the world.

Penguins can’t fly. When  Penguins come ashore they take waddling steps on their short legs.

In winter the temperature drops fast.And there is a strong gayl.The sun does not rise.

did you  know there is no sun in winter? its just cold and windy.

In antarctica male emperor penguins can survive on freezing pack ice, where blizzards case the temperature to drops well below zero.

Emperor penguins have thick water proof coat on their skin.and feathers that overlap to keep them warm to and fluffy layers.