Hiwarau And Bailee adding sentences.

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At Kawau Island for our activity Mr Jacobsen was our coach on the confidence course.

I was nervous about sailing on camp because I thou-rt I was going to tip over.

We went to the abseiling course

Hiwarau lamb stack.

This is my video of my lamb stack.

Hiwarau Heard A Whisper.

Once upon a time in a deep dark forest I could hear a little girl she was crying she needed help. So I tried to track her voice and fine her so I started to run because I could hear it close to me. Out of no wear a it was nothing.

So I ran back to my hut and I saw something run pass and a little laugh. TRY AND CATCH ME!!! I was scared so I went to sleep. Then I could see a shadow looking straight and me it had red eyes.

So I ran out the door and stayed out of the house and I started to cry. I was scared but when I heard a nother sound that said my name I tried to tell her to go away but she said my name again HIWARAU COME AND PLAY WITH MEEE!!!!

NOOO!!! I will not play with you go away please then after that she said OK so I went back inside. And I woke up it was just a dream then I heard A sound but it was just the little mouse and a cat.

The Accident

Once a pone a time there was a boy riding a four wheeler it tipped over him and then he stated to cry. He was in so much pain he could not feel his legs his elder brother called the ambulance and they came but they could not push it off him so the don it again. 1,2,3, push and then the four wheeler came of him.

And he was rushed to hospital and they said you got to stop showing off. After that he had a cast on his leg he had to limp to go to the toilet and back.so the nurse gave him a wheel chair.

A cupel of days later he went home he was happy to go home but he still had that cast his mum and his family were happy so they had a party. At his farm so after that they all were sleepy so they all went to bed.

The next day they woke up and milked the cows and feed the pigs and this time he toke a ride  on the four wheeler and he did not full over he just called his dog and his dog and the boy was chasing the sheep in to the shearing shed to get sheared.

The Stuck Cow Named Liku!!!

              The Stuck Cow Named Liku!!!

Once upon a time there was a cow named Liku he was looking for fresh grass to eat. So he went away from the other cows. And went freezing down the icy grass and slept and fell under the ice and got stuck.

Liku was unconscious and almost fell to sleep and  he was cold and his hooves. Started to get rheumatics and was going to sleep. And then all of a sudden the cow herd the farm dog bark and the farmer ran to Liku and was rubbing. The cow to keep him warm.

The farmer and the dog went to get the tractor and put A rope around Liku and started to pull the cow out but liku was to heavy. So the farmer pulled him with all the power the tractor had and he pulled the cow out and put the warm towel and dried the cow.

So after that the farmer put Liku in the barn. the other cows were asleep and Liku was the only one up so Liku just ate the grass and drinked milk. The he was tired so Liku went to walk to his side of the barn and went to sleep.

Ariata’s Big Day!!!!

                             Ariata’s Big Day!!!!

On a spring sunny day Aritah’s fleece is hot and she is eating grass. Aritah and her friends and all the other sheep are hot because of all their heavy big fleece to keep them warm in winter.

So the sheep dog barks at the sheep to scare them because they think they got the

power.the sheep were chased and scared  so the sheep ran away

So when the dogs chased the sheep all the way to the shed they all had to wait. And then the sheep dog jumps on the sheep and starts again to bark at all the other sheep and Aritah was scared of the sheepdogs.

When it was Arita's turn to get shorn she  was terrified She was kicking yelling she was crying h and the man flipped her on her back sheared her. She had cold feet because she was scared she tried to run away but he was manhandling Aritah lucky they were finished then aritah was happy.

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