Wednesday, 26 June 2013

Adding detail to the end of sentence.

children had to stay inside at lunchtime because on Friday. It was cold and raining.

All the year 5 and 6 children have their own net-book. To help them learn.

The fields are muddy outside.Because it was the thunder the rain and hailstones.

Playtime is at that's when Pt England school kids can eat their lunch.

Learning my timetable is important. Because it’s to help me get brainy.

Wednesday, 19 June 2013

Thursday, 13 June 2013


                        Puting detail in the middel of the sentences
    Antarctic seals have thick layer of blubber,under their  skin,to help them survive from strong icy gales.

During winter the sun doesn't rise in Antarctica, it is always dark in winter and the temperature drops below zero.

Leopard seals prey on Antarctic penguins,for their diet and to survive.

Wednesday, 12 June 2013

Detail In Sentences

Mr Burt takes assemblies on Friday for Pt England school\

Mr Burt takes us to assemblies where we sing the national anthem on Friday.

Mr Burt takes us to assemblies for d Duffy certificates and sometimes shows, on Friday.

Lots of people are from a faraway places to come visit Auckland city in New Zealand.