Years back there were 2 tribes,Scarabs & Chafers. There was a border that they never crossed. They lived far away in the dessert where it was very hot.
An object fell from the sky. They thought it was a rock but it wasn't so they got their scientist to do sketches. It was a cherry stone. Then the Scarabs and Chafers wanted to fight over it. It took them years to build.
Their base was under ground.They left the seed up top on the ground and the beetles were underground. They made shafts and tunnels as their weapon they made a spear and sharp saws and catapults.
And then they were ready to fight next they had no resson to fight because the seed was gone it turned into a cherry tree had blossoms and the cherry tree wah sides on both sides.
An object fell from the sky. They thought it was a rock but it wasn't so they got their scientist to do sketches. It was a cherry stone. Then the Scarabs and Chafers wanted to fight over it. It took them years to build.
Their base was under ground.They left the seed up top on the ground and the beetles were underground. They made shafts and tunnels as their weapon they made a spear and sharp saws and catapults.
And then they were ready to fight next they had no resson to fight because the seed was gone it turned into a cherry tree had blossoms and the cherry tree wah sides on both sides.
2 comments:
It was a good story wasn't it!
You said "It took them years to build" I don't understand, what did they build?
I know you are working hard to write sentences that are clear to read. Keep it up Hiwarau.
What a great job! I especially liked your painting. It seems you are doing a great job so keep up the good work. Be careful starting your sentences with the word and, though. Most teachers in high school and college don't like that too much. Great complete sentences, though. I agree with Ms. Garden, keep it up!
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